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My School

My school,
A place that will not,
Let me be me,
A place where,
Preps and Jocks are belonged.
That is not me.

My school,
A place where,
Being popular is wanted.
A place where,
Athletes are recognized,
And I am left in the dust.

My school,
A place where,
Bass Dirty Bucks,
Are a necessity.
A place where,
Shirts must stay tucked in,
And will not let me express myself.

But…

My school,
A place where,
Teachers are great,
A place where,
Lessons are learned.
And leave me with good Morals.

My school,
A place where,
Friends are welcomed,
A place where,
Kindness fills my heart.
And a smile is on my face.

So,
If this poem I wrote,
Started as negative,

Why,
Did it make me happy,
In the end?
just a poem about my private school...
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Fantasy-Charm Featured By Owner May 30, 2008
I might go to a Private School...
it depends..
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poems-iz-love73 Featured By Owner May 30, 2008
how?
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Fantasy-Charm Featured By Owner May 30, 2008
If my school gets any more retarded, as my dad puts it, then I will probably go to a private school
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poems-iz-love73 Featured By Owner May 30, 2008
well whats wrong with ur school...honestly man, i think public schools are awesome...they dont say "you cant do"...they say, "You can do"...does that makes sense?
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Fantasy-Charm Featured By Owner May 30, 2008
Not at my school, they always say you can't do...
My school is gay man...
My school doesn't do shit about the bullies and such..
They just pretend nothing happens...
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poems-iz-love73 Featured By Owner May 30, 2008
wow. I didnt know...that must suck...i HATE bullies...i wish those asses die...
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Fantasy-Charm Featured By Owner May 30, 2008
EXACTLY
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poems-iz-love73 Featured By Owner May 30, 2008
that stinks...
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CaptainKBX Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2008
Y'know, I used to go to a private school...

But it was for kindergarten thru half of 2nd grade...

Look at my age; 3 months older than Sonic 2 (All the math cancels itself out [3 - the square root of nine{3}= 0, etc.]) and Sonic 2 is turning 16 on Nov. 24. My birthday is August 24.

What's that got to do with poems?

Anyhow, I am actually quite charismatic in school... Dunno why I left. Well, it got rather frustrating, really.

My charisma comes from the fact that I don't really argue.. at all.

I know I'm kinda lecturing you, but just listen to your parents, don't fight at school, and most importantly, don't argue.

Keep your anger inside, like a Jedi... It'll come out when you need it... but also when you don't.

Try to just go with the flow, and you'll smoothly go along.

Hmm... I can be silly when I'm tired and bored... but also very creative and inspiring... NEAT!
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poems-iz-love73 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2008
what does charismatic mean?
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CaptainKBX Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2008
It means like, gets along really good with everyone or nice to talk to or something.

People like to be around you, sorta.

I was more of the first thing... I didn't talk much.
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poems-iz-love73 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2008
well thats a good quality to have!
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CaptainKBX Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2008
And half the reason was just that!

Yes it is...

remember that... It's almost like a life lesson on the internet...
So if your parents start saying stuff about not learning anything, you can show them that...
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Rikagurl Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2008
girl i feel u!! i go to a private school 2.
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poems-iz-love73 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2008
aww really??
i think my school is alright
at times it can be annoying.
I like your made up sonic character by the way.. really cool!
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Rikagurl Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2008
myschoo.we really hate the principal.
teachers dont listen
theres a snotty girl in ma class and we DONT get along
but i have people who keep me sane.
and thanks!
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poems-iz-love73 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2008
ur welcome!
And im sorry about your principal!
Ergh, it annoys me when a school doesnt have a proper principal
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Rikagurl Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2008
we all do. he told a little 2nd grader in front of us that she was gonna shot somebody becuse she threw a mall rock. i mean, really!
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